Alkisah diceritakan seorang kapten bajak laut bersama para krunya berlabuh di sebuah pulau. Bukan bajak laut biasa, tapi bajak laut yang paling ditakuti di tujuh lautan saat itu. Orang menyebut kapal mereka dengan nama The Black Key. Kapten mereka kejam, para krunya pun brutal tanpa mengenal belas kasihan.
Sang kapten tak pernah menemukan pulau ini sebelumnya, dia merasa perlu untuk menguasai pulau itu. Keinginan itu begitu kuat hingga kapten pun memutuskan untuk membuat kekacauan di pulau itu.
Dengan mudah, sang kapten menguasai pulau itu. Mulailah dia menindas para penduduk, membunuh bagi mereka yang melawan, membakar rumah mereka dan menyiksanya hidup-hidup hingga akhirnya dia mendapati seorang gadis kecil menangis. Menangis melihat orang tuanya dibakar hidup-hidup.
Matanya biru. Berkilauan karena butiran-butiran air mata yang menggenang di pelupuknya. Di lehernya tergantung sebuah rosario. Sang kapten mengiranya rosario, tapi itu bukan sekedar rosario. Bentuknya mirip tapi sedikit beda dengan ukiran asing di atasnya.
Sang gadis menatap kapten, lalu dia menggenggam ‘rosario’ nya dan berkomat-kamit membaca sesuatu dalam bahasa asing yang tidak dimengerti oleh sang kapten dan para krunya.
Kemudian langit bergemuruh, angin berhembus kuat, petir menyambar-nyambar. Badai datang secara cepat dan sosok gadis kecil itu berubah menjadi sesuatu yang beda, di luar akal sehat manusia.
Matanya bercahaya biru.
Sang gadis berdiri dengan angkuh, rambutnya berkibar-kibar tertiup angin. Di belakangnya sesosok bayangan hitam muncul dengan wajah menyeramkan. Marah.
“KAU! BERANI-BERANINYA KAU MENGACAU DI RUMAHKU!'”
Suaranya berbeda. Suara sang gadis tetap sama, namun ditambah dengan suara berat dan suara melengking di belakangnya membuatnya terdengar mengerikan.
Para awak kapal bergidik, namun sang kapten tetap berdiri tegak berusaha tenang.
“KAU! YANG TELAH MENGACAUKAN RUMAHKU! TERIMALAH INI!”
Tiga suara dengan kompak membaca sebuah mantera dengan bahasa asing yang sama. Tubuh sang gadis perlahan-lahan melayang, matanya masih bersinar biru dan mulutnya tak berhenti membaca mantera.
“JIWAMU DAN PARA AWAK KAPALMU AKAN TUNDUK DAN MELAYANIKU!”
Lalu sang gadis terjatuh, dia pingsan. Kemudian bumi bergetar hebat, daratan terbelah dan batu-batu berjatuhan dari langit. Sang kapten dan para krunya berlari kabur ke kapal mereka, dan dengan aba-aba sang kapten mereka berlayar meninggalkan pulau tersebut.
Sang kapten menghirup napas lega, namun keadaan belum memihak dirinya. Tiba-tiba saja lautan bergejolak hebat, badai pun bertambah mencekam. Kemudian munculah tentakel-tentakel besar mencoba melilit badan kapal. Sang kapten langsung mengambil keputusan cepat.
“SERAAAANGG!”
Dan mulailah awak kapal menembakkan seluruh pelurunya, mengayunkan pedang-pedang mereka dengan gagah berani namun semua sia-sia. Kraken, monster laut berwujud gurita raksasa berhasil melilitkan tentakelnya ke tubuh kapal dan menariknya jauh ke dalam dinginnya laut.
Sang kapten dan para awaknya telah dikutuk menjadi abadi, kapal mereka takkan pernah berlabuh dan mereka akan terus berlayar di tujuh lautan hingga akhir dunia. Mereka akan menghantui kesunyian lautan dan menyerang kapal-kapal layar.
Tempat munculnya sesosok Roh penghuni pulau di pulau tersebut tiba-tiba terbentuk sebuah air terjun. Oleh sang gadis kecil, para penduduk pulau diminta minum air dari air terjun tersebut agar selamat. Lalu setiap bayi yang baru lahir di pulau itu harus dimandikan di air terjun tersebut.
Namun yang paling mengerikan adalah setiap pendatang yang singgah di pulau tersebut harus meminum air tersebut, agar setelah dia meninggalkan pulau dia tidak dicari oleh sang kapten dan para awaknya yang dikutuk. Maka air terjun itu disebut Guardian Waterfall, Air Terjun Penyelamat.
Fin.
PS: Gilak. Awalnya ragu bakal nyelesain ini, tapi apa daya. Soalnya udah setahun lebih gak nulis sih.
Inspirasinya dari The Flying Dutchman dan lebih banyak ngambil dari Jack Sparrow sih :p
Iya, referensinya kurang.
Jadi butuh banged referensi tentang fantasi yang ada hubungannya dengan bajak laut sama negeri Belanda.
Kisahnya ada dua. Mungkin next bakal berbau Peter Pan :)
In English
Once upon time a pirate captain with his crew landed on an island. Rather than regular pirates, but the most feared pirate on the seven seas at the time. People refer to their ships by the name The Black Key. Their ruthless captain, the crew was brutal with no pity know.
The captain had never discovered this island before, he felt the need to control the island. The desire was so strong that the captain decided to create chaos in the island.
Easily, the captain controlled the island. He began to oppress the inhabitants, killing those who resist, their houses burned and tortured him until he finds a little girl crying. Wept to see his parents burned alive.
His eyes were blue. Glistening with beads of tears that welled in her eyes. Around her neck hangs a rosary. The captain thought him the rosary, but it's not just a rosary. The shape is similar but slightly different with foreign engravings on it.
The girl stared at the captain, and he grasped 'rosary' it and mumbling to read something in a foreign language not understood by the captain and his crew.
Then the sky rumbled, wind, lightning darting. The storm came quickly and the figure of the little girl turned into something different, beyond human reason.
His eyes glow blue.
The girl stood up with dignity, her hair fluttering in the breeze. Behind her dark figure appeared with a scary face. Angry.
"YOU! HOW DARE YOU messed up in my house! '"
His voice is different. The girl's voice remains the same, but coupled with a deep voice and a squeaky voice behind it makes it sound terrible.
The crew of the ship shuddered, but the captain was trying to stay standing still.
"YOU! WHO has disrupted my house! ACCEPT THIS! "
Three sound with a compact read a spell with the same foreign language. The girl's body drifted slowly, her eyes still bright blue and his mouth did not stop reading the incantation.
"Your soul is your ship AND WILL ABIDE Crew and served!"
Then the girl fell, she fainted. Then the earth shook, and the mainland split stones falling from the sky. The captain and the crew ran to escape to their ships, and with the captain's command they set sail to leave the island.
The captain breathe a sigh of relief, but the situation has not sided with him. Suddenly the great turbulent ocean, the storm was growing tense. Then came the big tentacles wrapped around the hull to try. The captain immediately took a quick decision.
"SERAAAANGG!"
And the crew began firing all the bullets, swinging their swords bravely but all in vain. Kraken, a giant sea monster tangible octopus tentacles had wrapped the body of the boat and pulled away into the cold sea.
The captain and the crew has been cursed to be immortal, they would never ship docked and they will continue to sail the seven seas until the end of the world. They will haunt the silence of the sea and attacked the ships of the screen.
Spirit places the emergence of a figure on the island inhabitants of the island is suddenly formed a waterfall. By the little girl, island residents are asked to drink water from the waterfall in order to survive. Then every newborn in the island should be bathed in the waterfall.
However, the most terrible is that every immigrant who arrive on the island have to drhnk the water, so after he left the island he was not wanted by the captain and his crew are cursed. Then it is called Guardian waterfall Waterfall, Niagara Savior.
Fin.
PS: Gilak. Nyelesain will initially hesitant, but alas. Because not write more than a year already anyway.
Inspiration from The Flying Dutchman and a lot more of Jack Sparrow ngambil anyway: p
Yes, references will be less.
So it took about fantasy banged reference that has to do with pirates at the Netherlands.
The story is twofold. Maybe next Peter Pan would smell :)
Sang kapten tak pernah menemukan pulau ini sebelumnya, dia merasa perlu untuk menguasai pulau itu. Keinginan itu begitu kuat hingga kapten pun memutuskan untuk membuat kekacauan di pulau itu.
Dengan mudah, sang kapten menguasai pulau itu. Mulailah dia menindas para penduduk, membunuh bagi mereka yang melawan, membakar rumah mereka dan menyiksanya hidup-hidup hingga akhirnya dia mendapati seorang gadis kecil menangis. Menangis melihat orang tuanya dibakar hidup-hidup.
Matanya biru. Berkilauan karena butiran-butiran air mata yang menggenang di pelupuknya. Di lehernya tergantung sebuah rosario. Sang kapten mengiranya rosario, tapi itu bukan sekedar rosario. Bentuknya mirip tapi sedikit beda dengan ukiran asing di atasnya.
Sang gadis menatap kapten, lalu dia menggenggam ‘rosario’ nya dan berkomat-kamit membaca sesuatu dalam bahasa asing yang tidak dimengerti oleh sang kapten dan para krunya.
Kemudian langit bergemuruh, angin berhembus kuat, petir menyambar-nyambar. Badai datang secara cepat dan sosok gadis kecil itu berubah menjadi sesuatu yang beda, di luar akal sehat manusia.
Matanya bercahaya biru.
Sang gadis berdiri dengan angkuh, rambutnya berkibar-kibar tertiup angin. Di belakangnya sesosok bayangan hitam muncul dengan wajah menyeramkan. Marah.
“KAU! BERANI-BERANINYA KAU MENGACAU DI RUMAHKU!'”
Suaranya berbeda. Suara sang gadis tetap sama, namun ditambah dengan suara berat dan suara melengking di belakangnya membuatnya terdengar mengerikan.
Para awak kapal bergidik, namun sang kapten tetap berdiri tegak berusaha tenang.
“KAU! YANG TELAH MENGACAUKAN RUMAHKU! TERIMALAH INI!”
Tiga suara dengan kompak membaca sebuah mantera dengan bahasa asing yang sama. Tubuh sang gadis perlahan-lahan melayang, matanya masih bersinar biru dan mulutnya tak berhenti membaca mantera.
“JIWAMU DAN PARA AWAK KAPALMU AKAN TUNDUK DAN MELAYANIKU!”
Lalu sang gadis terjatuh, dia pingsan. Kemudian bumi bergetar hebat, daratan terbelah dan batu-batu berjatuhan dari langit. Sang kapten dan para krunya berlari kabur ke kapal mereka, dan dengan aba-aba sang kapten mereka berlayar meninggalkan pulau tersebut.
Sang kapten menghirup napas lega, namun keadaan belum memihak dirinya. Tiba-tiba saja lautan bergejolak hebat, badai pun bertambah mencekam. Kemudian munculah tentakel-tentakel besar mencoba melilit badan kapal. Sang kapten langsung mengambil keputusan cepat.
“SERAAAANGG!”
Dan mulailah awak kapal menembakkan seluruh pelurunya, mengayunkan pedang-pedang mereka dengan gagah berani namun semua sia-sia. Kraken, monster laut berwujud gurita raksasa berhasil melilitkan tentakelnya ke tubuh kapal dan menariknya jauh ke dalam dinginnya laut.
Sang kapten dan para awaknya telah dikutuk menjadi abadi, kapal mereka takkan pernah berlabuh dan mereka akan terus berlayar di tujuh lautan hingga akhir dunia. Mereka akan menghantui kesunyian lautan dan menyerang kapal-kapal layar.
Tempat munculnya sesosok Roh penghuni pulau di pulau tersebut tiba-tiba terbentuk sebuah air terjun. Oleh sang gadis kecil, para penduduk pulau diminta minum air dari air terjun tersebut agar selamat. Lalu setiap bayi yang baru lahir di pulau itu harus dimandikan di air terjun tersebut.
Namun yang paling mengerikan adalah setiap pendatang yang singgah di pulau tersebut harus meminum air tersebut, agar setelah dia meninggalkan pulau dia tidak dicari oleh sang kapten dan para awaknya yang dikutuk. Maka air terjun itu disebut Guardian Waterfall, Air Terjun Penyelamat.
Fin.
PS: Gilak. Awalnya ragu bakal nyelesain ini, tapi apa daya. Soalnya udah setahun lebih gak nulis sih.
Inspirasinya dari The Flying Dutchman dan lebih banyak ngambil dari Jack Sparrow sih :p
Iya, referensinya kurang.
Jadi butuh banged referensi tentang fantasi yang ada hubungannya dengan bajak laut sama negeri Belanda.
Kisahnya ada dua. Mungkin next bakal berbau Peter Pan :)
In English
Once upon time a pirate captain with his crew landed on an island. Rather than regular pirates, but the most feared pirate on the seven seas at the time. People refer to their ships by the name The Black Key. Their ruthless captain, the crew was brutal with no pity know.
The captain had never discovered this island before, he felt the need to control the island. The desire was so strong that the captain decided to create chaos in the island.
Easily, the captain controlled the island. He began to oppress the inhabitants, killing those who resist, their houses burned and tortured him until he finds a little girl crying. Wept to see his parents burned alive.
His eyes were blue. Glistening with beads of tears that welled in her eyes. Around her neck hangs a rosary. The captain thought him the rosary, but it's not just a rosary. The shape is similar but slightly different with foreign engravings on it.
The girl stared at the captain, and he grasped 'rosary' it and mumbling to read something in a foreign language not understood by the captain and his crew.
Then the sky rumbled, wind, lightning darting. The storm came quickly and the figure of the little girl turned into something different, beyond human reason.
His eyes glow blue.
The girl stood up with dignity, her hair fluttering in the breeze. Behind her dark figure appeared with a scary face. Angry.
"YOU! HOW DARE YOU messed up in my house! '"
His voice is different. The girl's voice remains the same, but coupled with a deep voice and a squeaky voice behind it makes it sound terrible.
The crew of the ship shuddered, but the captain was trying to stay standing still.
"YOU! WHO has disrupted my house! ACCEPT THIS! "
Three sound with a compact read a spell with the same foreign language. The girl's body drifted slowly, her eyes still bright blue and his mouth did not stop reading the incantation.
"Your soul is your ship AND WILL ABIDE Crew and served!"
Then the girl fell, she fainted. Then the earth shook, and the mainland split stones falling from the sky. The captain and the crew ran to escape to their ships, and with the captain's command they set sail to leave the island.
The captain breathe a sigh of relief, but the situation has not sided with him. Suddenly the great turbulent ocean, the storm was growing tense. Then came the big tentacles wrapped around the hull to try. The captain immediately took a quick decision.
"SERAAAANGG!"
And the crew began firing all the bullets, swinging their swords bravely but all in vain. Kraken, a giant sea monster tangible octopus tentacles had wrapped the body of the boat and pulled away into the cold sea.
The captain and the crew has been cursed to be immortal, they would never ship docked and they will continue to sail the seven seas until the end of the world. They will haunt the silence of the sea and attacked the ships of the screen.
Spirit places the emergence of a figure on the island inhabitants of the island is suddenly formed a waterfall. By the little girl, island residents are asked to drink water from the waterfall in order to survive. Then every newborn in the island should be bathed in the waterfall.
However, the most terrible is that every immigrant who arrive on the island have to drhnk the water, so after he left the island he was not wanted by the captain and his crew are cursed. Then it is called Guardian waterfall Waterfall, Niagara Savior.
Fin.
PS: Gilak. Nyelesain will initially hesitant, but alas. Because not write more than a year already anyway.
Inspiration from The Flying Dutchman and a lot more of Jack Sparrow ngambil anyway: p
Yes, references will be less.
So it took about fantasy banged reference that has to do with pirates at the Netherlands.
The story is twofold. Maybe next Peter Pan would smell :)
Woow..That's a great story! So cooolll! :D
BalasHapusHahaha. Thanks ya. Kelihatanya bakal saya rubah ceritanya :))
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